Well, try to enjoy the story a little more and spam the comments a little less :p Or at least collect all of them in one thread instead of adding twelve comments spread over six threads?
I don’t think the plugins have that feature. In fact I’m not actually sure what timezone they’re showing, it looks like GMT. So an hour behind me, it’s currently 3:30 for me.
That’s true but its not like the story is realistic at all.You know what Feretta can make this into a series.It’s got the potensial,background info,al it needs now is to make it.
So Fen’s female parts are not fully functional? Or is it more a matter that a canid like herself or others of differnt breeds can get her pregnant if she is in heat. We know her male parts work normally but isn’t there usually a tell that a heat cycle is starting?
I know Dog have them and Vix and Fen are both types of fox so they would of known. Also I’m guessing that Taurs are a different race so far off from Fen and even Red that they can only breed with other Tuars.
Kill Vix’s enemies? Attempt to depict a really awkward wedding (by our standards, of course)? Reveal Vix’s parents kicked the bucket? Have Vix literally buy a farm?
That last one may be a bad idea for the farm being bought…
For the love of mercy and codex…I really thought I wrote the HTML stop for italics correctly at the end of ‘really’…autocorrect, thou needst an ironic lesson in internet grammar.
First of all… VIX PREGNANT!!!! Secondly, Feretta do you have this whole comic planned out or… do you just go along with what you feel? Thirdly, if you ever make this comic end I’m gonna be pissed, 4th, how many chapters do you plan on it being?
2: It’s kinda a mix of the two. I have the rough idea of what I want the story to be, where it’s heading and what I want to include per chapter, and then I just write out a few pages of script and fill in the blanks as I go.
3: Every good story has to have an ending :p
4: Book 1 will probably end after chapter 6. I’m not 100% sure, because [see 2]. Book 2? No idea yet.
3: At the very least we know it’ll have a good long run. I doubt it’ll reach One Piece length but I don’t see you giving up on this for years. For one your writing style is much like mine (Big plot point is set in stone stuff between somehow leads to it. Plot point More story that leads to next plot point repeat till you reach $99.99.99 or 9001 at least.) two you love creating this world and the ideas will keep coming. thirdly well book 1 is still being made and your only now at chapter 4 so yeah long series ahead if you ask me.
I’ll be reading every page of it as it goes along too. Also I’m just going on a limb but seening how you updated Monday this week/last week I think I may need to be ready to wait another day. Not that I mind but I am wanting to see where we end up as a living computer copies the memory of Fen and finds a way to help her. If it’s not in need of tech support. I read those comments. XD
The epilogue of chapter 1 took place over the course of several months, as pointed out by multiple factors such as “It’s no longer winter” and “Fen has shown amazing progress over the few months she’s been with us”.
From the start of chapter 2, the trip to the village took about a day and a half, then a dragon fight happened, then they slept for “about a week”, before getting dragged backwards half a day’s travel, spending a night camping (and fucking) and then spending a day in a cave.
This was then followed up by a full night’s travel, before eventually ending up back here, so in total? Right about a week and three days. “Barely a week” 😉
“Yeah, you missed the part where a questionably sane nudist owl paid for our inn fees and (temporary) new clothes, had us trot into a cave that ignores some laws of physics in places, and ran out on us when the short-term danger was over.”
I don’t think Fen is going to make a good politician for many other reasons… loyalty to financial backers who ‘volunteer’ strangers into dangerous quests might not be a virtue to pick up at this time 😛
If you look back at your old pages back in chapter one, you can definitely see a big change in your art style! I just love to see this affect in these comics.
Now I just wonder what Fenfen’s view in the last panel means… Is it more like an I-did-something-bad-view and is she ashamed of herself or is she smiling secretly for being that … “active” in this week? 😀
Sorry for bad english, I’m german and too lazy to think properly because I have Summer Holidays 😀
Fen: In my defense, I didn’t intend to get Fen pregnant. It was an accident.
Mis seemed a bit put out when she mention that Fen almost killed Vix.
fucking hell 80 comments
swearing ok yes?
Did fen get vix pregnant or did the dragon thing?
Fen’s been one busy little bee, hasn’t she, he, uh, whatever.
Now that we know that Vix is pregnant that may be the reason she was so hungery after they woke up.
And Fen wasnt nearly as hungry as Vix.
I am sorry that I comment so much on this.I just have a lot of free time at the moment.:/ .Oh and I also love this storie sooo…YEAH!!!!:D
Well, try to enjoy the story a little more and spam the comments a little less :p Or at least collect all of them in one thread instead of adding twelve comments spread over six threads?
To be far, the robber had boobles and a peen..soo, and vixavil looked like the gapping dragon from dark souls at one point
Feretta already said why.
Yeah, but that wasn’t actually Vix 😉
7:30 right?Well here it is an hour later.That would actually explaine alot.
Hey, it’s the internet, some of us aren’t even close to Fer’s time zone (as a Californian, I’m in GMT -8).
I wonder if it is possible for Ferretta to show both the host and user time-stamp for a post?
Ask her then.
I don’t think the plugins have that feature. In fact I’m not actually sure what timezone they’re showing, it looks like GMT. So an hour behind me, it’s currently 3:30 for me.
9am?
I just would like to know what timezone you are in.Its getting confusing.
GMT+1. What’s confusing? :p
So what time is it there?
That’s true but its not like the story is realistic at all.You know what Feretta can make this into a series.It’s got the potensial,background info,al it needs now is to make it.
I’m confused, is this not a series already?
Ok,the chapters count as a series,right?I mean a series as in finish this storie then make a sequele of it…
I mean after you finish this series.
Oh yeah sorry I didnt know this was book 1 sorry.Apparently I was talking about book 2 without realising it.SORRY!
wait…. wouldn’t she be pregnant also I mean the 4 legged robber came buckets in her?
No, that would require Fen to be fertile, compatible and in heat, all at the same time.
So Fen’s female parts are not fully functional? Or is it more a matter that a canid like herself or others of differnt breeds can get her pregnant if she is in heat. We know her male parts work normally but isn’t there usually a tell that a heat cycle is starting?
I know Dog have them and Vix and Fen are both types of fox so they would of known. Also I’m guessing that Taurs are a different race so far off from Fen and even Red that they can only breed with other Tuars.
Is this right?
Oh almost forgot, but if Vix gets aborted, I’m gonna lose my shit.
Gawd! You guys just won’t give me a break! I can’t kill Vix, I can’t end the comic, I can’t even kill Vix’s little ones!? D:< What CAN I do!?
Kill Vix’s enemies? Attempt to depict a really awkward wedding (by our standards, of course)? Reveal Vix’s parents kicked the bucket? Have Vix literally buy a farm?
That last one may be a bad idea for the farm being bought…
For the love of mercy and codex…I really thought I wrote the HTML stop for italics correctly at the end of ‘really’…autocorrect, thou needst an ironic lesson in internet grammar.
Sure do something like that
First of all… VIX PREGNANT!!!! Secondly, Feretta do you have this whole comic planned out or… do you just go along with what you feel? Thirdly, if you ever make this comic end I’m gonna be pissed, 4th, how many chapters do you plan on it being?
-Dylan (aka Husker)
2: It’s kinda a mix of the two. I have the rough idea of what I want the story to be, where it’s heading and what I want to include per chapter, and then I just write out a few pages of script and fill in the blanks as I go.
3: Every good story has to have an ending :p
4: Book 1 will probably end after chapter 6. I’m not 100% sure, because [see 2]. Book 2? No idea yet.
ok…. fair enough, LOVE ZE COMIC do
3: At the very least we know it’ll have a good long run. I doubt it’ll reach One Piece length but I don’t see you giving up on this for years. For one your writing style is much like mine (Big plot point is set in stone stuff between somehow leads to it. Plot point More story that leads to next plot point repeat till you reach $99.99.99 or 9001 at least.) two you love creating this world and the ideas will keep coming. thirdly well book 1 is still being made and your only now at chapter 4 so yeah long series ahead if you ask me.
I’ll be reading every page of it as it goes along too. Also I’m just going on a limb but seening how you updated Monday this week/last week I think I may need to be ready to wait another day. Not that I mind but I am wanting to see where we end up as a living computer copies the memory of Fen and finds a way to help her. If it’s not in need of tech support. I read those comments. XD
“and the last time I send you out for anything young lady!”
More like “Welp, mission accomplished I guess?”
Soooo, why is Fen getting all of her hair chopped off? I liked the long hair 🙁
Lol, thats your only question.
At the moment, yes. Got a pretty good handle on the rest.
Long hair is hard to manage and dangerous for a warrior. Plus I wanna show off her super-sexy back more.
I like long hair but she looks adorable with the short hair.
Damn…. this page makes me want to go back and REREAD the whole damn adventure over again xD
Well do it 😀
“You may have missed the part where I poisoned the townsfolk’s water supply, burned their crops and delivered a plague unto their houses.”
“…”
“That last part was a joke.”
“It’d better damn well be.”
“Yeah, I didn’t deliver a plague.”
Ah, it’s good to be back commenting on this webcomic.
Better not be waiting to do it either.
“Oh come on I set fire front door one time. I wasn’t even going for flammable magic that time!!”
Oh how I missed this comic so.
:3
That is one pissed off woman
Nah, she’s not too bad 😉
Well, that’s a pretty sum-up of the whole thing !
Now I’m wondering how it could get worst. Maybe the dragon coming back to wreak havoc ? Na… I think it would be more surprising if it happen ^^
Worse? It’s not THAT bad to begin with, really. :p
Love the fact she is not more worried about vix being knocked up.
Well, I mean it’s not that problematic, after all 😀
Wait up a minute. This has all been over the course of a week? Start of Chapter II to end of III, all one week?
My bad. Epilogue of Chapter I, all the way to the end of Chapter III.
The epilogue of chapter 1 took place over the course of several months, as pointed out by multiple factors such as “It’s no longer winter” and “Fen has shown amazing progress over the few months she’s been with us”.
From the start of chapter 2, the trip to the village took about a day and a half, then a dragon fight happened, then they slept for “about a week”, before getting dragged backwards half a day’s travel, spending a night camping (and fucking) and then spending a day in a cave.
This was then followed up by a full night’s travel, before eventually ending up back here, so in total? Right about a week and three days. “Barely a week” 😉
She could be using R.A. Salvatore’s Drizzt series’ ten-day long week too..?
The Drizzt series is set in Faerun, the Forgotten Realms DnD setting, and it adopts its 10-day week (and everything else) from that.
Not saying you don’t know that. Just felt it was relevant.
Actually, I should thank you, I do not know as much as I should about that series – it may yet be applicable.
“Yeah, you missed the part where a questionably sane nudist owl paid for our inn fees and (temporary) new clothes, had us trot into a cave that ignores some laws of physics in places, and ran out on us when the short-term danger was over.”
Or do we not talk about Sha here?
We do not speak ill of the financial backers, even if you think they can’t hear you. That’s how fundaing gets pulled.
I don’t think Fen is going to make a good politician for many other reasons… loyalty to financial backers who ‘volunteer’ strangers into dangerous quests might not be a virtue to pick up at this time 😛
I wonder what ever happened to that owl?
She left 😀 Don’t worry, she’ll be back.
Never talk about Sha Club D:
well… this cant go worst…right?
It’s not that bad 😀
well mini vixies, a posible roasted barn owl , a fer may get spanked well ya cant get worst
If you look back at your old pages back in chapter one, you can definitely see a big change in your art style! I just love to see this affect in these comics.
Comic is doing what it’s supposed to be doing, which is boosting my skillz 😉
Now I just wonder what Fenfen’s view in the last panel means… Is it more like an I-did-something-bad-view and is she ashamed of herself or is she smiling secretly for being that … “active” in this week? 😀
Sorry for bad english, I’m german and too lazy to think properly because I have Summer Holidays 😀
I think she looks more like “I did good, yes I did!” 😉
She’s frumpy about the hair yank :p
When do you think the next one is going to be ready?Just asking.P.S. I’m new here
Pages are sundays or mondays, depending on how my weekends are going.
Thank you.:)