I find myself actually waiting for updates on your webcomic at times which is good, i really don’t do that often. So thanks HAHA i really do enjoy reading your comic on multiple levels.
Your artwork is very solid both the shading and linework is really quite good, and you seem to work quite well with the style you chosen to make the comic in. In addition to that your proportions are extremely good on the characters, which aside from shading/coloring is one of the hardest things to do.
Next i have to say i really like the story, it’s extremely engaging. It always leaves questions but also still explains some things at the same time. Additionally the characters are wonderfully written, you get quite attached to them.
Overall i say you have done a great job ^^ i look forward to seeing more.
Well, honestly your story is great ! Na, awesome seem even better ! I read it since… I know I begun as soon as chapter 1 was posted on gehentai. Guess that’s a little while…
Anyway, I like it a lot, and I hope the next page will come soon, because I’m a fan of it ! Especially of all those characters !
But I have a question : I’ve heard somewhere that there is a chapter 1.5 and 2.5, but I haven’t found them here. Did I search in the wrong place, or is it not here ?
Chapters 1.5 and 2.5 are wrapped into their respective primary chapters here, so 1.5 is the epilogue at the end of chapter 1 (here presented as part of 1), and same for 2.5 and 2. Don’t worry, nothing’s missing, it’s just put together a little differently 🙂
I have an idea for a vision she might have while sleeping: it would be about her mother caring her in her arms and leving her in front of an orphinege, then awaken to a vision of her companions badly ingered by a dragon in a human shape, with a red eye and a scar across the other, with skin as black as space, and average muscular body, dressed in ragged paints, missing a horn, and a big rip in the middle of his left wing.
1: That’s awfully specific..
2: Fen’s mom died in labor. :p
3: Thanks for the input, but I have an entire skyscraper of ideas to work with on my own, and I prefer doing my own writing. Critiques are welcome, character interjection and trying to feed me unsolicited ideas is not. I’m not upset about it, I’m just letting you know 🙂 I’m not the greatest writer in the world, but I DO know how to write my own comic with my own characters.
I’ve been waiting an update of your comic for days(since i discovered your comic 8 days ago :b) and want to say i love your drawings :3
I’m trying to follow your drawing style, i just love it
I find myself actually waiting for updates on your webcomic at times which is good, i really don’t do that often. So thanks HAHA i really do enjoy reading your comic on multiple levels.
Your artwork is very solid both the shading and linework is really quite good, and you seem to work quite well with the style you chosen to make the comic in. In addition to that your proportions are extremely good on the characters, which aside from shading/coloring is one of the hardest things to do.
Next i have to say i really like the story, it’s extremely engaging. It always leaves questions but also still explains some things at the same time. Additionally the characters are wonderfully written, you get quite attached to them.
Overall i say you have done a great job ^^ i look forward to seeing more.
I do have to say I’m quite proud of what I’ve accomplished, considering 90% of the time I have no idea what I’m doing 😀
Thanks though, I’ve really learned a lot from doing it. 🙂
Ill give internet for naughties!
Don’t worry, I’m sure we’ll have naughtiness very soon 😉
Ish a joke not worry I sence important plot incoming or a revelation about her parents from a dream or nightmare
Well, honestly your story is great ! Na, awesome seem even better ! I read it since… I know I begun as soon as chapter 1 was posted on gehentai. Guess that’s a little while…
Anyway, I like it a lot, and I hope the next page will come soon, because I’m a fan of it ! Especially of all those characters !
But I have a question : I’ve heard somewhere that there is a chapter 1.5 and 2.5, but I haven’t found them here. Did I search in the wrong place, or is it not here ?
Glad you like it!
Chapters 1.5 and 2.5 are wrapped into their respective primary chapters here, so 1.5 is the epilogue at the end of chapter 1 (here presented as part of 1), and same for 2.5 and 2. Don’t worry, nothing’s missing, it’s just put together a little differently 🙂
Great ! So… well, waiting even more for the rest ! Bet the chapter title will have a role here.
I have an idea for a vision she might have while sleeping: it would be about her mother caring her in her arms and leving her in front of an orphinege, then awaken to a vision of her companions badly ingered by a dragon in a human shape, with a red eye and a scar across the other, with skin as black as space, and average muscular body, dressed in ragged paints, missing a horn, and a big rip in the middle of his left wing.
1: That’s awfully specific..
2: Fen’s mom died in labor. :p
3: Thanks for the input, but I have an entire skyscraper of ideas to work with on my own, and I prefer doing my own writing. Critiques are welcome, character interjection and trying to feed me unsolicited ideas is not. I’m not upset about it, I’m just letting you know 🙂 I’m not the greatest writer in the world, but I DO know how to write my own comic with my own characters.
I’ve been waiting an update of your comic for days(since i discovered your comic 8 days ago :b) and want to say i love your drawings :3
I’m trying to follow your drawing style, i just love it
Glad you’re enjoying my work 🙂
What an amateur, Vix deserves someone with more energy. ^_^
Hey, she’s a middle-aged woman, she can’t help it if the young and spry vixen is a nuclear powerplant.
*looks around for his wife*
Isn’t that what we all want in our mate? :p
Given the chapter title, I wonder how many planned pages will be dedicated to dream sequences.
Chapter title! Right! Good call.
Y’all’s finally learnin’ 😉
At least 200 😀